After “Le tombeau des rois” by Anne Hébert
This bird/cat, a falcon/panther,
flies/races out of the tomb
across the barren tundra/savannah
her eyes/ears instinctively
look/listen for something
they can no longer see/hear.
It swoops/dashes north/west toward the
pole/sea, another instinct takes over
leads it along lines of magnetism.
With every mile, the falcon/panther knows this way
is true, can feel the ancient forces guiding blindly.
She perches/sits in a crag above a ravine,
can see/hear the figure lying prone below,
hops/lopes down to the cadaver hanging desiccated
from the overturned car pecks/licks at the eyes,
which look like a cave in a cliff,
which beg her to peck/lick that she may see again.
3 comments:
Totally gone in the head as I comment on this from a hotel lobby after two days of interpreting trade union issues...but are the oblique stroke words in the style of the CAnadian poet or your suggestions for synonyms...-- great idea for a poem to use those stroke alternatives though...
Aisha (BTW Maggie is gone...not needed now, sadly)
OH! I am gone indeed! panthers dont fly and birds dont lope...all became clear as reading from top to bottom rather than bottom-up (a good style of decision-making but not of poetry reading)
Aisha
Hi aish... thanks for reading top to bottom ;-)
Hi Wings... the panther has nothing to do with Hébert's or any other poem I read, but I will say that part of thie inspiration also came from my own "Lucy, Lucie" poem. Thanks for stopping by
RT
Post a Comment